The results of the company’s cost-cutting measures are evident in its profi ts, which increased 5 percent during the fi rst 3 months of this year after it fell over the last two years.
(A) which increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after it fell (B) which had increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after it had fallen (C) which have increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after falling (D) with a 5 percent increase during the first 3 months of this year after falling (E) with a 5 percent increase during the first 3 months of this year after having fallen
OA is C
OG says the underlined part need to clarify the sequence by using verb tenses. Here are the explanation for the choices:
A The verb tenses do not distinguish between the times at which these indicators occurred; the singular it does not agree with the plural profits. B The verb tenses do not distinguish between the times when the indicators occurred; the singular it does not agree with the plural profits. C Correct. The verb tenses clearly indicate the sequence of events. D It is not clear what connection is being described by with; the prepositional phrase makes the sentence wordy and unclear. E It is not clear what connection is being described by with; the prepositional phrase makes the sentence wordy and unclear.
IF the sequence is the first priority, I think E best resolves this problem "having fallen..." clearly indicates that the action falling happened before the action increase. Why is E wrong? 1) because it starts with "with+ing" pattern? I've noticed that OG seems to avoid this "with" pattern. But could anyone tell me why is it wrong? if it's a noun modifier, then it makes perfect sense to modify "profits". 2) because it contains "having"? GMAT seems to avoid this form too.
Please explain~~~Thanks
jnelson0612
Post subject: Re: The usage of "with +ing" format & "having + past participle"
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