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| The term "extending" for Sentence Correction |
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Stacey Koprince
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This is a slightly weird issue.
First, you mentioned that "a labyrinth of narrow tunnels constructed around 400 B.C." sounds fine to you but "a labyrinth of narrow tunnels extending for more than 25 miles underground" does not. This is where we don't just want to rely on our ears. I think they both sound fine. You don't. How can we possibly reconcile that just based on what they sound like? :) Does this sound any better? the room contained a maze of cubicles extending the entire length of the room. If so, the construction is essentially the same as that in the labyrinth question. "extending" just means stretching that far, going along for that length - that sort of thing. If not, oh well - read on. For the labyrinth question, the second part of that offers to modifiers describing something about the labyrinth, yes? 1) constructed around... 2) extending for... So, I do want both of these in modifier form, consisting of the participle form of a verb. Past participles are constructed with -ed endings for regular verbs (there are many irregular ones, of course) and present participles are constructed with -ing endings. Is the construction still occurring today or is it entirely in the past? It was in the past, so I use the past participle constructed. Is the labyrinth still "extended" today - that is, is it still stretching out for that length today - or was that only so in the past? They just did the study, so the labyrinth is still extending today - use the present participle extending. These are parallel because I'm using the participle form for both - the unusual thing here is just that the two modifiers apply to different time frames, so I have to adjust the wording accordingly. I don't want to use "extends" because that is a conjugated form of the verb (present tense) - so that's definitely not parallel to the participle form. I also don't want to use "extended" because the labyrinth is still extending - it still exists, according to the original sentence. If I used "extended" I would mean that it no longer does. How's that - does that help? |
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