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RonPurewal
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Post subject: Re: So-called green taxes, which exact a price for the use Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 5:35 am |
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@ mohit
we don't need "are" because there is no ambiguity. if the sentence were ambiguous without "are", then we would need to insert it. (note that the sentence is not actually incorrect if you add "are"; you just don't have to.)
examples: i know more about biology than chemistry correct. (i could say "...than about chemistry", but i don't have to, since there is no ambiguity here)
i know more about shakespeare than my brother. here, i NEED a helping word. if i mean that i am superior to my brother in terms of shakespeare knowledge, then i have to add "does". if i mean that i know more about shakespeare than i know about my own brother, then i have to add "about".
same deal here. there's no ambiguity (as in the first example here), so you don't need a helping word.
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Post subject: Re: So-called green taxes, which exact a price for the use Posted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 3:59 pm |
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RonPurewal wrote: @ mohit
we don't need "are" because there is no ambiguity. if the sentence were ambiguous without "are", then we would need to insert it. (note that the sentence is not actually incorrect if you add "are"; you just don't have to.)
examples: i know more about biology than chemistry correct. (i could say "...than about chemistry", but i don't have to, since there is no ambiguity here)
i know more about shakespeare than my brother. here, i NEED a helping word. if i mean that i am superior to my brother in terms of shakespeare knowledge, then i have to add "does". if i mean that i know more about shakespeare than i know about my own brother, then i have to add "about".
same deal here. there's no ambiguity (as in the first example here), so you don't need a helping word. Hi Ron !!! This is just too ambiguous ! How to decide in the Exam time that are is creating redundancy or adding to clarity ? :-) Thanks Mohit
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Post subject: Re: So-called green taxes, which exact a price for the use Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 7:34 am |
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I suppose the concept is as below
i know more about biology than chemistry
Two options Option#1 i know more about biology than i know about chemistry = chemistry acting as object = correct
Option#2 i know more about biology than chemistry know about biology. = wrong. Chemistry cannot act as subject
Since no ambiguity so correct to use as "i know more about biology than chemistry"
But in case 2..... "i know more about shakespeare than my brother."
Both object and subject are possible:
Option#1 ======= i know more about shakespeare than my brother i know more about shakespeare than my brother. = brother acting as subject...sentence makes sense.
Option#2 ======== i know more about shakespeare than i know about my brother. = brother acting as object...sentence makes sense.
Since both the above make sense...so we need helping verb......
Probably here we need to understand what does the 2nd word of comparison mean....as above....
Please correct me if I am wrong here.
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Post subject: Re: why dont we need are Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 3:52 am |
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goelmohit2002 wrote: Can you please explain why we do not need "are"? countries as varied as are China,.... two reasons. (1) it's not necessary. in general, you only put helping verbs (like this one) into the second half of a parallel construction for one of two reasons: - the sentence is AMBIGUOUS WITHOUT the helping verb ( click here for further thoughts on this) or - the parts of the parallel construction are so obnoxiously long that the sentence is difficult to understand without the helping verb. (2) that's not the usual convention for the form "as ADJ as ...". for instance, if i'm as old as my twin brother, then that's how i say it. i'm not "as old as is my twin brother".
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Post subject: Re: why dont we need are Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 5:25 am |
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RonPurewal wrote: goelmohit2002 wrote: Can you please explain why we do not need "are"? countries as varied as are China,.... two reasons. (1) it's not necessary. in general, you only put helping verbs (like this one) into the second half of a parallel construction for one of two reasons: - the sentence is AMBIGUOUS WITHOUT the helping verb ( click here for further thoughts on this) or - the parts of the parallel construction are so obnoxiously long that the sentence is difficult to understand without the helping verb. (2) that's not the usual convention for the form "as ADJ as ...". for instance, if i'm as old as my twin brother, then that's how i say it. i'm not "as old as is my twin brother". Thanks Ron !!!
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Post subject: Re: Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:25 am |
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jwinawer wrote: Anonymous wrote: I chose C for this Q. After reading the Ron's comments , it seems A is the answer but my query still remains:
a)The environment and natural resource base of countries as varied as China--> Comparing Countries b) The environment and natural resource base of countries as varied as THOSE OF China--> Comparing the environment and natural base of Countries
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1 ) Are both gramatically Correct as per the intent (I mean if i were to convey the context written above , would the above sentence make sense? (Y/N)
2) In this Question, what are we trying to compare ? "Countries" OR "their environemental and natural base"??
Tutors, Please help 1. No, I don't think so. If you wanted to compare the environments and natural resource bases from different places, you would have to make environment and base plural (because there'd be many of them), so something like this: "..are having a positive effect on environments and natural resource bases as varied as those of China, the Netherlands, and Hungary." 2. Countries. Because it comes right before the "as" and because it is plural. Do you mean "environment and natural resource base" is actually singular? I thought it should be plural b/c there are actually two things: environment + natural resource base, both of them are non countable words though. Please explain. Thanks!
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Post subject: Re: So-called green taxes, which exact a price for the use Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:48 am |
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and if "environment and natural resource base" is plural. would Choice B be correct too?
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Post subject: Re: So-called green taxes, which exact a price for the use Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 5:11 pm |
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Why "are" is not necessary in A?
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Post subject: Re: why dont we need are Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:30 am |
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the best way to process "as varied as" here is as an IDIOMATIC EXPRESSION.
here's a valid way to think about it: you can substitute "including" for "as varied as"; the sentence should still work. these two don't have exactly the same meaning - i.e., "including" isn't the SAME as "as varied as" - but, if one of them is grammatically ok, then so is the other.
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the countries themselves aren't "varied" (i.e., it would be incorrect to say that "the countries are varied"), so it's not correct to use the verb "are".
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Post subject: Re: So-called green taxes, which exact a price for the use Posted: Sun May 02, 2010 5:20 pm |
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Hi Ron,
Replacing "as varied as" with "including" to look for the correct answer is very helpful. Are there any other comparison idioms that can be replaced with "including" to help find the right grammatical construction?
Thanks!
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Post subject: Re: So-called green taxes, which exact a price for the use Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 7:04 am |
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zarak_khan wrote: Hi Ron,
Replacing "as varied as" with "including" to look for the correct answer is very helpful. Are there any other comparison idioms that can be replaced with "including" to help find the right grammatical construction?
Thanks! hmm i can't think of any others off the top of my head that are this exactly replaceable, but "limited to" is also pretty close.
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Post subject: Re: why dont we need are Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:48 pm |
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RonPurewal wrote: the best way to process "as varied as" here is as an IDIOMATIC EXPRESSION.
here's a valid way to think about it: you can substitute "including" for "as varied as"; the sentence should still work. these two don't have exactly the same meaning - i.e., "including" isn't the SAME as "as varied as" - but, if one of them is grammatically ok, then so is the other.
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the countries themselves aren't "varied" (i.e., it would be incorrect to say that "the countries are varied"), so it's not correct to use the verb "are". Ron, why we can't say"the contries are varied"? Sorry I can't get it....
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Post subject: Re: So-called green taxes, which exact a price for the use Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 2:18 am |
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I believe Ron's point is that countries as varied as China, the Netherlands, and Hungary does not imply that any one of these countries is varied, whatever exactly that would mean, but that they vary from one another.
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Post subject: Re: why dont we need are Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2011 9:08 am |
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RonPurewal wrote: goelmohit2002 wrote: Can you please explain why we do not need "are"? countries as varied as are China,.... two reasons. (1) it's not necessary. in general, you only put helping verbs (like this one) into the second half of a parallel construction for one of two reasons: - the sentence is AMBIGUOUS WITHOUT the helping verb ( click here for further thoughts on this) or - the parts of the parallel construction are so obnoxiously long that the sentence is difficult to understand without the helping verb. (2) that's not the usual convention for the form "as ADJ as ...". for instance, if i'm as old as my twin brother, then that's how i say it. i'm not "as old as is my twin brother". Ron, pls help In a posting in this thread, it is said that we need verb when there is ambiguity. D is clear and dose not need verb. why D is wrong.(the following is discussed in thid forum already). DOSE THIS MEAN WE PREFER PARALLELISM EVEN THERE IS NO AMBIGUITY. A study published in the British Medical Journal showed that woman who ate nuts more than five times a week were about one third less likely to suffer from coronary heart diseases as those who ate no nuts at all. A. as those who ate B. as women who ate C. as those eating D. than women eating E. than were those who ate Ron, pls, help after studying the two above problems, can I conclude that BECAUSE THE LEFT SIDE CONTAINS A VERB, THE RIGHT SIDE MUST CONTAIN A VERB. IF THE LEFT SIDE DOSE NOT CONTAIN A VERB, THE RIGHT SIDE DOSE NOT NEED A VERB.
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Post subject: Re: why dont we need are Posted: Sun Dec 25, 2011 10:12 pm |
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thanghnvn, you are seriously over-complicating the issue.
look at the structures: (d): women who ate... vs. women eating... (e): women who ate... vs. those who ate...
(e) is clearly better. (d) is inferior to (e), because the two structures are written in completely different ways, while they are written identically in (e).
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