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VJ wrote:
Hi,
Can someone please help with this:
When an active tooth in the shark’s jaws is lost or worn down, many spare teeth lie in seemingly limitless reserve, each of which are ready to slide into the appropriate position.
A. When an active tooth in the shark’s jaws is lost or worn down, many spare teeth lie in seemingly limitless reserve, each of which are ready to slide into the appropriate position.
'When' denotes the at the same time; and use of when in this incorrectly signifies that many spare teeth lie in seemingly limitless reserve at that same time an active tooth in the shark’s jaws is lost or worn down. Infact, spare teeth are always there.
Also, each of which should follow by singular verb 'is' not 'are'.
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B. Whenever an active tooth is lost or worn down, many spare teeth lie in seemingly limitless reserve in the shark’s jaws, which are each ready to slide into the appropriate position.
Use of 'whenever' is incorrect because of same reason as in A. Also, 'which' is incorrectly modifying shark's jaws.
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C. Many spare teeth lie in seemingly limitless reserve in the shark’s jaws, each one of which are ready to slide into the appropriate position when an active tooth is lost or worn down.
Correct use of 'when'
but still 'each one of which are ready' should be 'each one of which is ready'
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D. The many spare teeth lying in seemingly limitless reserve in the shark’s jaws, each one of which is ready to slide into the appropriate position whenever an active tooth is lost or worn down.
'The many spare teeth lying in' - use of present continuous verb 'lying' is incorrect
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E. In the shark’s jaws, many spare teeth lie in seemingly limitless reserve, each one ready to slide into the appropriate position whenever an active tooth is lost or worn down.
Correct.