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 Post subject: Re: SC: parallelism
 Post Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 2:51 pm 
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Orange08 wrote:
I read somewhere that "due to" has to be replaced by "caused by" and not "because of".
Is my understanding for the definition of "due to" correct? If so, only option B is left as correct answer.
Please clarify.

A is the correct answer


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 Post subject: Re: SC: parallelism
 Post Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 3:08 pm 
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priyankur.saha wrote:
Originally developed by ancient Hawaiians, surfing appeals to people due to the sport’s unusual confluence of adrenaline, skill, and high paced maneuvering, an unpredictable backdrop that is, by turns, graceful and serene, violent and formidable, and the camaraderie that often develops among people in their common quest to conquer nature.
a. surfing appeals to people due to the sport’s unusual confluence of adrenaline, skill, and high paced maneuvering, an unpredictable backdrop that is, by turns, graceful and serene, violent and formidable, and the camaraderie that often develops
b. surfing’s appeal is its unusual confluence of adrenaline, skill, and high paced maneuvering, an unpredictable backdrop that is, by turns, graceful and serene, violent and formidable, and the camaraderie that often develops



originally developed by ....... is modifier of surfing .
an unpredictable background ............is modifier of maneuvering.
the sport's ujusual confluence ......, and the camaraderie .....,are two parallel statements.we can read as......
high paced maneuvering ,an unpredictable backdrop that is graceful and serene,violent and formidable,
so A is correct


here there are two modifiers and one parralel sentence.

c. surfing’s appeal to people is due to the sport’s unusual confluence of adrenaline, skill, and high paced maneuvering, an unpredictable backdrop that is, by turns, graceful and serene, violent and formidable, and developing camaraderie
d. surfing appeals to people due to the sport’s unusual confluence of adrenaline, skill, and high paced maneuvering, a backdrop that is unpredictable and that is, by turns, gracefully and serenely violent and formidable, and the camaraderie that often develops
e. surfing appeals to people due to their unusual confluence of adrenaline, skill, and high paced maneuvering, an unpredictable backdrop that is, by turns, graceful and serene, violent and formidable, and the camaraderie that often develops

Several items are separated by comma, making it tough to understand several parts in the sentence. Instead of comma, can semicolon be right choice to link various items?
"Originally developed by ancient Hawaiians, surfing appeals to people due to the sport’s unusual confluence of adrenaline, skill, and high paced maneuvering; an unpredictable backdrop that is, by turns, graceful and serene, violent and formidable; and the camaraderie that often develops among people in their common quest to conquer nature."


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 Post subject: Re: SC: parallelism
 Post Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 7:57 am 
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Orange, i'm not sure that you want to use a blanket rule about what can be replaced with what; in all cases it's preferable to consider what the sentence is trying to say and then to get rid of answer choices that are incorrect. Regardless of the reason you choose to use "due to", B is not the only answer left, as A includes the phrase "due to"..

Vijay, it looks like you don't have a question about this one; if i've missed it, please repost..

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