Hello Sir,

I am sriwidu from India.I did my Bachelor of Engineering (2007 passed out).I've been working for 4.3 years with a leading product development MNC in India as a Database Consultant.

I am interested in pursuing my Masters of Business Administration in The United States.I am looking forward for a career in Management Consulting.

My Gmat Score : 690
AWA: 6
TOEFL : 109
Total Work Exp : 4.3 years

My work profile in brief includes the below:

1) Clients Database performance analysis and parameter evaluation.
2) Planning and Managing of over 150 clients related activities ranging from basic database design to major release/upgrades and implementations.
3) Real time capture process setup.
4) Architectural planning and designing of databases for several clients after coordinating with respective client service delivery managers and project directors.

Extra Curricular Activities
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1) Winner of Science Exhibition at school level.
2) Leading Flight Cadet for Air Squadron, National Cadet Corps - India.
3) Choreographer for theme based troupe dances at school level and college level.
4) Chief Coordinator for College Level Cultural Fest.
5) Created and currently managing a website which provides a common platform which invites all the database administrators across the globe to interact with each other and share their technical skills thereby promoting knowledge and research for the required at free of cost.

Founded a team which works non-profit to provide Education through IT for Schools located in the the Villages of India where IT is a distant dream.The team now comprises of 25 people which focuses on gathering IT Hardware waste,reassembling it and redistributing to the schools.

I hereby request you to evaluate my profile and provide me suggestions if any.I am also considering to give my GMAT again.

Thank you.

With Regards,
Sriwidu

Hi! From the information that you provided here, it looks like you have some solid credentials. Since you didn't specify what schools you are looking at, it is difficult for me to assess your GMAT score. With a 690, you are right on the lower edge of the range for the most competitive schools.

In order to build a strong application, I encourage you to write about your accomplishments at work, not your responsibilities. Also, look to highlight and showcase your stories in engaging and compelling ways.

Best of luck,

Rachel Beck

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