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 Post subject: Proper Usage of With???
 Post Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 2:30 pm 
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In reviewing the Idioms List in ManhattanGMAT's SC Book, I had a hard time trying to understand why the following WRONG statement is considered WRONG:

Usage of WITH
RIGHT: The lions growled, WITH their fur STANDING on end
WRONG: WITH only 25% of the student body, seniors get 50% of the resources

Can anyone clarify why the WRONG statement containing "Seniors" is grammatically incorrect?

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Rules of WITH

With is a preposition.
http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/prep ... s-rule.htm

A preposition is followed by a "noun". It is never followed by a verb.

By "noun" we include:

* noun (dog, money, love)
* proper noun (name) (Bangkok, Mary)
* pronoun (you, him, us)
* noun group (my first job)
* gerund (swimming)

A preposition cannot be followed by a verb. If we want to follow a preposition by a verb, we must use the "-ing" form which is really a gerund or verb in noun form.


So for the first sentence:

<Subject+Verb: The lions growled> + <preposition: with> + <Noun group: their fur standing on end>

Original: The lions growled, WITH their hair standing on end
Structure: The lions growled, WITH hair standing

For the 2nd sentence it should not work, but I am not sure how:

<Subject + Verb: With only 25% of the student body>
Original: WITH only 25% of the student body, seniors get 50% of the resources
Transposing Sentence: Seniors get 50% of the resources, WITH only 25% of the student body
Structure: Seniors get, WITH only 25%


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 Post subject: Re: Proper Usage of With???
 Post Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:40 pm 
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I want to know this topic too. :)


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 Post subject: Re: Proper Usage of With???
 Post Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:01 am 
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FYI: http://www.beatthegmat.com/proper-usage ... 45771.html


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 Post subject: Re: Proper Usage of With???
 Post Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 2:02 am 
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Thanks gkumar. Please post if there are additional questions to Stacey's response.

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