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Ron Purewal
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my initial instinct is to strongly dislike 'S2' as a general rule, because participial modifiers placed in that position usually describe a consequence of the action described in the main clause. see #71 in the yellow og, which i'm not allowed to reproduce here, for an illustration.
the issue is that 'having V-ed', by definition, describes a pre-existing condition, so i'm tempted to say that it's flat-out wrong in the given context. have you seen any context in which the gmat condones this usage? |
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Hei
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Hi Ron,
I have a pretty bad memory...as far as I can remember, I haven't seen any official GMAT question considering the above structures correct. I thought that the participle modifier ("having verb-ed") in S2 could not describe a consequence *unless* there was a comma preceding it, am I wrong? Do you consider that "describing a pre-existing condition" differ from "showing a sequence of events"? Thanks in advance. |
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Rey Fernandez
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You're right, Hei, a comma would be necessary before the participial modifier, as in:
The lawyer slammed her briefcase on the table, making it clear to everyone that she was unhappy. To your other point, I think "Having V-ed, S V O" clearly shows a sequence of events, specifically that the "having V-ed" event occurred before the V event. Rey |
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