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| Patience Lovell Wright, whose traveling waxworks exhibit |
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Ron Purewal
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choice b exhibits poor parallelism:
having an eccentric personality, a participial phrase, is placed in parallel with skilful wax renderings..., a noun phrase. choice e exhibits proper parallelism, in that both of the parallel items are noun phrases (the principal nouns being personality and renderings). -- oh, and by the way, it's tussaud (not 'tuscan'). |
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rschunti
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What are errors in choices "A", "C" and "D". Thanks
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| Re: Patience Lovell Wright, whose traveling waxworks exhibit |
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Ron Purewal
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choice a: bad parallelism because of... is not parallel to for... choice c: extremely bad parallelism - one part is a phrase (because of ...), and the other part is a complete clause (she was for her ...) - same issue as choice a, because vs. for choice d: bad parallelism - you can't get rid of the 'for' in the second part (it should be '...as for having...') - wordy (compare with the compact wording in choice e) |
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