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By choosing glass apartments towering a hundred feet
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By choosing glass apartments towering a hundred feet over brownstone units designed for earlier generations, seemingly younger-than-ever moneyed professionals have embraced a modern design ethic that accentuated their luxury-laden lives.

A By choosing glass apartments towering a hundred feet over brownstone units designed for earlier generations, seemingly younger-than-ever moneyed professionals have embraced a modern design ethic that accentuated
B By choosing glass apartments towering a hundred feet over brownstone units designed for earlier generations, seeming younger-than-ever moneyed professionals have embraced a modern design ethic that accentuates
C In choosing glass apartments in hundred-foot towers instead of brownstone units designed for earlier generations, seemingly younger-than-ever moneyed professionals have embraced a modern design ethic that accentuates
D In choosing glass apartments in hundred-foot towers instead of brownstone units designed for earlier generations, seemingly younger-than-ever moneyed professionals have embraced a modern design ethic that accentuated
E In choosing glass apartments towering a hundred feet over brownstone units designed for earlier generations, seeming younger-than-ever moneyed professionals have embraced a modern design ethic, accentuating

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C is the right answer
A and D are gone because of accentuated (past tense)
B and E are gone because of the use of seeming.
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Yep! You've got it. The past tense "accentuated" clashes with the present perfect "have embraced." Elim A and D. And "seeming / seemingly" is modifying the adjective "younger-than-ever" - adverbs have to modify adjectives, so we need the "seemingly" version of the word. Elim B and E. And you're done!
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Bumping up the thread to understand whether the usage of 'instead of' is correct.
Please clarify. Thanks.
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Guest501 wrote:
Bumping up the thread to understand whether the usage of 'instead of' is correct.
Please clarify. Thanks.


'instead of' here is ok, because it's used with a NOUN (instead of brownstone units...)
note that you could also use 'rather than' in the same context. ('rather than' is more general - it's acceptable with nouns, adjectives, verbs, ...just about anything - while 'instead of' is strictly limited to nouns and constructions that act as nouns.)

note that the use of 'over' here is unacceptable, because it creates as unintended interpretation: the glass apartments tower 100 feet over the brownstones (= they're standing next to each other, and the glass buildings are 100 feet taller). the use of 'instead of' results in a sentence free of ambiguity.
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