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 Post subject: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:45 pm 
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In California, a lack of genetic variation in the Argentine ant has allowed the species to spread widely; due to their being so genetically similar to one another, the ants consider all their fellows to be a close relative and thus do not engage in the kind of fierce inter colony struggles that limits the spread of this species in its native
Argentina.
A. due to their being so genetically similar to one another, the ants consider all their fellows to be a close relative and thus do not engage in the kind of fierce inter colony struggles that limits.
B. Due to its being so genetically similar the ant considers all its fellows to be a close relative and thus does not engage in the kind of fierce inter colony struggles that limit.
C. Because it is so genetically similar, the ant considers all its fellows to be close relatives and thus does not engage in the kind of fierce inter colony struggles that limits.
D. Because they are so genetically similar to one another, the ants consider all their fellows to be close relatives and thus do not engage in the kind of fierce intercolony struggles that limit.
E. Because of being so genetically similar to one another, the ants consider all their fellows to be a close relative and thus do not engage in the kind of fierce intercolony struggles that limits.

OA: D
Could you please explain this further?

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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 2:37 am 
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vidhyamenon84 wrote:
In California, a lack of genetic variation in the Argentine ant has allowed the species to spread widely; due to their being so genetically similar to one another, the ants consider all their fellows to be a close relative and thus do not engage in the kind of fierce inter colony struggles that limits the spread of this species in its native
Argentina.
A. due to their being so genetically similar to one another, the ants consider all their fellows to be a close relative and thus do not engage in the kind of fierce inter colony struggles that limits.
B. Due to its being so genetically similar the ant considers all its fellows to be a close relative and thus does not engage in the kind of fierce inter colony struggles that limit.
C. Because it is so genetically similar, the ant considers all its fellows to be close relatives and thus does not engage in the kind of fierce inter colony struggles that limits.
D. Because they are so genetically similar to one another, the ants consider all their fellows to be close relatives and thus do not engage in the kind of fierce intercolony struggles that limit.
E. Because of being so genetically similar to one another, the ants consider all their fellows to be a close relative and thus do not engage in the kind of fierce intercolony struggles that limits.

OA: D
Could you please explain this further?

Thanks!


Ok let me try...

A - being in active. Hence out.
B - Again Being in active.
C - There is no clear antecedent for "It" - Hence that's out as well.
D - Looks good with they referring to "ants" later in the sentence.
E - Again Being in active so out.


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 3:00 am 
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Struggles that Limits- It should read struggles that limit.Subject-Verb disagreement
A,C and E are out

Between B and D,
Due to its being genetically similar..........Err .. To What? Illogical Comparsion. Eliminate B.

D remains.



The answer choice has consider to be which is a suspectful Idiom.Consider XY is most preferred in GMAT land. Infact all of the answer choices have Consider to be.


What is the source of this question?


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 9:25 am 
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gokul_nair1984 wrote:
Struggles that Limits- It should read struggles that limit.Subject-Verb disagreement
A,C and E are out

Between B and D,
Due to its being genetically similar..........Err .. To What? Illogical Comparsion. Eliminate B.

D remains.



The answer choice has consider to be which is a suspectful Idiom.Consider XY is most preferred in GMAT land. Infact all of the answer choices have Consider to be.


What is the source of this question?


Yes i missed the below. Good one Gokul.

Struggles that Limits!


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 9:50 am 
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I thought the "it" in "Because it is so genetically similar" modifies "ant" [Because it is so genetically similar, the ant considers all its]
Isn't that the case?

Also doesn't the "its" in "the spread of this species in its native" refer to a singular ant??

How does all this add up? Or am I looking at it all wrong?


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 1:38 pm 
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vidhyamenon84 wrote:
I thought the "it" in "Because it is so genetically similar" modifies "ant" [Because it is so genetically similar, the ant considers all its]
Isn't that the case?


You are right. "It" is not ambiguous and has a clear referent. Its native also refers to ant's(collective) or species' native.

The problem with "C" is: Struggles that Limits-Subject and verb do not match. Hence C is out.


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 11:36 pm 
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What would you give more importance to? Sub-verb agreement? or Pronoun agreement?


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 4:01 am 
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Subject Verb agreement- Beyond any scope of doubt....

Moreover, pronoun ambiguity is never an absolute rule for negating answers on the GMAT..Some pronoun amibiguousness could also be resolved using logical sense/meaning of the sentence et al...


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 12:35 pm 
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gokul_nair1984 wrote:
Subject Verb agreement- Beyond any scope of doubt....

Moreover, pronoun ambiguity is never an absolute rule for negating answers on the GMAT..Some pronoun amibiguousness could also be resolved using logical sense/meaning of the sentence et al...


I think it really depend on the sentence. At times pronouns can be tricky. However, at times you can eliminate 2/3 choices with pronouns very quickly.


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 12:53 pm 
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@ salman
Check this out : http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/post40400.html#p40400

Clarity of a sentence can never come over Correctness .

The sentence has to grammatically correct first and this does not depend on anything but grammatical correctness..


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 5:21 pm 
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gokul_nair1984 wrote:
@ salman
Check this out : http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/post40400.html#p40400

Clarity of a sentence can never come over Correctness .

The sentence has to grammatically correct first and this does not depend on anything but grammatical correctness..


Thanks useful post.


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 7:33 am 
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is this problem from GMAT PREP?
if so, please provide a screen shot; i haven't seen it before.

@gokul -- "consider to be" is not incorrect; it's just a different variation.
you'll see "consider X Y" in most cases, because it's more concise, but "consider X to be Y" is an equivalent construction. neither is incorrect.

in fact, it's possible to write a construction in which "consider X to be Y" is actually necessary, because "consider X Y" is an ambiguous construction.
here you go:

at the restaurant i tried the "bandeja paisa", considered one of antioquia's staple dishes, and regarded the rest of the menu with fascination.
--> two meanings.
1) i "considered" the dish = thought about trying it;
2) the bandeja paisa is considered to be one of the staple dishes of antioquia.

if i mean to write #2, i can write
at the restaurant i tried the "bandeja paisa", considered to be one of antioquia's staple dishes, and regarded the rest of the menu with fascination
...no more ambiguity.

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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2011 9:39 am 
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The Choice "D" has some ambiguity: its native Argentina (in the non-underlined part) does not match with they.

Can anyone help to explain this question? Thanks in advance!


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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2011 12:43 pm 
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xyin wrote:
The Choice "D" has some ambiguity: its native Argentina (in the non-underlined part) does not match with they.

Can anyone help to explain this question? Thanks in advance!


I interpret this as "they" is referring to "ants" and "its" is referring to "species".

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 Post subject: Re: GMAT Prep Verbal - SEntence Correction
 Post Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 2:37 am 
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Hi Ron,

Can you please explain this question with regard to the use of "because of" and "due to" in each of the options.

How to eliminate the options on the basis of their usage?

Thank you


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