StaceyKoprince wrote:
The conclusion states that the school expects to reduce *dramatically* the amount of sugar children consume specifically because the students will no longer be able to get such sugary drinks at school. You have to make sure that you directly address that conclusion.
If, as a result of no longer having access to sugary drinks at school, sugar intake will go down dramatically, the author must be assuming that the students currently do consume a lot of those sugary drinks at school. If they are not actually consuming many sugary drinks at school, then the plan won't work very well.
D establishes the idea that students get most of their in-school sugar from snack food. If that's the case, then they are NOT getting the majority of their in-school sugar from sugary drinks, so swapping out sugary drinks for more healthy drinks is not likely to have a dramatic effect.
B, on the other hand, addresses a situation outside of the conclusion's scope: what students might drink at home or at other places besides school. The school officials' plan does not address other places where students might consume sugary drinks (or sugar in any form) - it only addresses in-school consumption.
Hi Stacey,
I am a little confused here. Both the options seem as enticing.
The explanation given against B is this -
The intention of the school officials’ plan is to limit the intake of sugar by students. Access to sugary drinks outside of school is certainly a factor in students' total sugar intake. However, the possibility that students might consume sugar elsewhere fails to undermine the school officials’ plan to restrict access to sugary drinks at school. As a result of the restricted access during school hours, those students who have access to sugary drinks outside of school may still consume less sugar than they otherwise would.
Cant I apply similar reasoning against D?
Even if the school restricts access to just the sugary drinks, the students would still consume a lot less sugar than they actually do (thanks to no access to sugary drinks).
Please help!