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A semi-colon can only be used correctly if both sentences are independent clauses - that is, each could be a stand-alone sentence exactly as written. Also, in the real world, the two sentences should be connected in some way (talking about the same thing). That bit won't get tested on the GMAT because they only give you one sentence, so there's no alternative answer choice to using a semi-colon when the two sentences shouldn't be connected (they can't give you another choice in which they do split it into two separate sentences).
In this case, the semi-colon is used correctly. For the other sentences, the issues don't revolve around semi-colon usage; you have to use other reasons to eliminate them. Let me know if you have questions about any of the specific errors in the other choices.
By the way, notice that the original sentence sounds a little bit awkward, even though it is grammatically and structurally correct. When the correct answer is A, it isn't unusual for that original sentence to sound a little funny - that's how they get us to pick something else, even though we read the correct sentence first. Just watch out for that!
_________________ Stacey Koprince Instructor Director of Online Community ManhattanGMAT
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