I have once send u my profile. now there is a positive change in my profile. please evaluate again

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Nationality: Indian Male 23years old

GMAT: I have taken GMAT and got 640 score(Q50 V26).

Graduation: Completed B.tech(mechanical engineering) in may 2006 with CPI-8.38 out of 10 ie GPA of 3.4 out of 4 from National Institute of Technology, Nagpur,India. Topper of the batch.

Work experience: Full time. Working in Automobile firm (TATA motors-India's Biggest And World Fifth largest commercial vehicle manufacturer) from past two years from july 2006. Im currently working as Assistant Manager in Planning & operations(PE).

Extra curriculars: SQDCM member of planning(PE)- TATA MOTORS, Organiser of many cultural and technical events during graduation, Learnt Classical Indian Dancing, Leader of Fund collecting groups(Flood relief and soldier welfare fund), Got state ranks in many Talent Tests during school days.
Good Academics from childhood. XII standard-95.3% and X std-86.5%


YOUR ADVICE:

Re-take the GMAT. As an engineer/techie, you need to do whatever it takes to boost that verbal score. An engineer with a low verbal sends a huge red flag about your critical thinking skills (which is what the verbal section measures). If you're only using books, consider taking a course, or hiring a private tutor in your area (even if you're in India, you should be able to find one locally given the sheer number of Indians that apply to b-school each year). Shoot for a verbal score that is as close to 80% as possible.



CHANGE:

According to your advice i took private tutoring. I have taken GMAT again on 1st sep 2008. score 700 (M50 V34). please evaluate again considering this score.I want to go into some top B schools(top20) in 2009.

Congrats on the new GMAT score.

Schools in the lower half of the top-16 such as Darden, Duke, Michigan, Haas, NYU, Yale, UCLA and Cornell are schools where you could be in the mix assuming you can put together a strong application. Schools where you should have a reasonable shot of getting in are in the tier below that -- UT-Austin, Georgetown, UNC, USC and CMU.

For Europe, Oxford and Cambridge being schools where you should be competitive for.

Alex Chu
alex@mbaapply.com
www.mbaapply.com
http://mbaapply.blogspot.com

thank you.

can u tell me about schools in australia too? which schools are good and also i will b competitive enough?

should i use some essay editing or writing service for my essays to b school or write my own? will they be beneficial or they will create some problem?