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Ron Purewal
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nope - if you make just that one fix, then the sentence still has problems.
specifically: that sort of modifier - "different from antigenic drift, ..." - (which is called an appositive modifier, if you care about linguistic terminology) - is generally attributed to the immediately preceding noun. so, depending on whether you take the "immediately preceding noun" to be the literally preceding noun or the entire noun phrase, you're saying one of the following things: * (2 different strains of) influenza is what's different from antigenic drift * the combination of 2 different strains of influenza is what's different from antigenic drift the first is just wrong, and the second is wrong enough to be incorrect from the standpoint of sentence correction. remember, you should be interpreting these things very literally: the TERM "antigenic shift" differs from the TERM "antigenic drift". (the reason you know the sentence is about TERMS is because of its use of "refers to", which we wouldn't use if we were saying antigenic shift IS the phenomenon.) to maintain parallelism, you need a sentence that says unambiguously that antigenic shift is what's different from antigenic drift. to do that, you need a conjunction (as mentioned above), because antigenic shift is the subject of the first sentence. |
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