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| OG Verbal Review, #54 |
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Ron Purewal
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There doesn't need to be a comma, and, in fact, there shouldn't be one. Here we have the distinction between nonessential and essential modifiers:
ESSENTIAL modifiers, which DON'T have commas, narrow down the options for whatever you're describing. For instance: (1) (correct) This painting shows soldiers digging trenches. (2) (incorrect) This painting shows soldiers, digging trenches. This needs to be the first one, because it creates increased specificity: not all workers dig trenches, so you're narrowing things down. Therefore, the modifier is ESSENTIAL (i.e., you'd lose meaning without it), and doesn't take a comma. (3) (incorrect) Winters in New England with lots of snow can be brutal. (4) (correct) Winters in New England, with lots of snow, can be brutal. In this case you want #4, because ALL New England winters feature lots of snow. Therefore, the modifier doesn't narrow anything down - it merely clarifies things that are already implied by New England winters - and so it's NONESSENTIAL, requiring a comma. In any case, this sentence would be grammatically OK with or without the comma (just as all 4 of the above examples are grammatically OK, even though two of them don't make sense semantically). Since there's no comma, we can infer that not all mystics fit the given description - but that's fine. Choice B has a couple of problems: * 'And also' implies that being a mystic has little or nothing to do with being guided in public and private life by all that stuff - clearly not the intended meaning. * You can't use 'both' in the same construction as 'as well as'; to do so is both incorrect and redundant. |
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