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In Hungary, as in much of Eastern Europe

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RonPurewal
 Post subject: Re: In Hungary, as in much of Eastern Europe
 Post Posted: Sat Feb 04, 2012 3:57 am 
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sure thing

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rihanna.hayat
 Post subject: Re: In Hungary, as in much of Eastern Europe
 Post Posted: Sun May 19, 2013 10:41 pm 
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a quick question:

Correct sentence:
In Hungary, as in much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many of them in middle management and light industry.

How about:
In Hungary, as in much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many in middle management and light industry.

Can 'many' alone refer to working women?

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RonPurewal
 Post subject: Re: In Hungary, as in much of Eastern Europe
 Post Posted: Tue May 21, 2013 5:25 am 
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rihanna.hayat wrote:
a quick question:

Correct sentence:
In Hungary, as in much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many of them in middle management and light industry.

How about:
In Hungary, as in much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many in middle management and light industry.

Can 'many' alone refer to working women?

Thanks


as an editor i don't like that version, but it doesn't seem wrong.

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