thanghnvn wrote:
in the above question, pls, explain, why "as ..." is wrong in choice A,B, and C. What is the difference in meaning between the "as..." in choi A,B,C and the "comma..."
This is a complicated sentence. Let's look at the non-underlined part:
"During her presidency . . . , Elizabeth Cady Stanton,
Because we have a comma right after "Elizabeth Cady Stanton", another modifier describing her must immediately follow her name. If we did not have this comma then the verb of the sentence should closely follow her name.
Which of the answer choices properly starts a modifier describing Elizabeth Cady Stanton?
A) as she was
B) as she was
C) in being
D) a staunch supporter
E) a staunch supporter
A and B, "as she was", is wordy and incorrect. C, "in being", is also incorrect. Always have suspicion toward the word "being". D and E are correct ways to start the modifier; they launch right into a description of her. This allows the construction:
Elizabeth Cady Stanton, a staunch advocate of liberalized divorce laws, scandalized . . .
D is the correct answer.
Please let me know if I can clarify further.