KK wrote:
I dont see why 'X is exceptional because it does Y' is wrong. Please help!
i'll try to explain the difference in different words, and then i'll provide two examples using the same adjective.
because is used to state an actual relationship of
cause and effect. if you say 'X happened because of Y', you're declaring, essentially, that Y is what set X into motion, or that Y precipitated X.
in that is used to LIMIT or (RE)DEFINE a statement; it's used to say, basically, "the adjective i just wrote is ONLY true in the following way."
illustrations:
1)
i'm successful in my career in that i love my work and can set my own hours.
--> 'in that' is more appropriate here, because the author is trying to say ONLY that he loves his work and can set his own hours, and that he is not necessarily 'successful' in any other way. (the LIMITING or REDEFINING phrase 'in that' is especially appropriate here because the author is not writing about qualities stereotypically associated with "success", such as high income.)
--> if the author meant to say that he has achieved a more
conventional version of "success" (probably involving money) AS A RESULT of loving his work so much - i.e., he doesn't view having a job he loves
itself as success, but, rather, the things he's been able to achieve
because he loves his work - then 'because' would make more sense.
2)
i'm successful in my career because i work hard and practice relentless self-discipline.
--> 'because' is more appropriate here, because the success is a DIRECT RESULT of the author's hard work and self-discipline. clearly, hard work and self-discipline are not the author's definition of "success", so
in that would be inappropriate here.
let me know whether this makes sense. thanks!